-My wife’s birthday was the first so she gets an adorable Charmander! I figured it’d be appropriate with the latest release of X and Y.
-Note: all art belongs to me unless otherwise stated and may not be used without my permission.
-*Charmander © Satoshi Tajiri*
-Pencil (6H, 2B), Pen (Fine Point Sharpie, Brush), Blendy Stump.
-Crayon: black, brick red, lemon yellow, light blue, and orange.
I will say that you did an awesome job of making the Charmander very babyish and adorable. You made it small and chunky with the correct proportions enlarged. You also did a good job with the little bit of shading.
For a suggestions I can only think of two. The first is I think it might look good if there were little shimmers or shines (whatever you choose to call it) in his eyes, especially with how big they are. I think it'd give it's eyes more of a look like they are focused. The other thing is small, I'd suggest having the red on the inside of the fire. It looks a bit backwards to me, but maybe you like it better.
Overall, you did a fantastic job and it is super cute!
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